Question

为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。

提示：1. 衣着整洁；待人有礼，乐于助人；2. 遵守交通规则，不闯红灯；

3. 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾；4.补充两句个人观点。

参考词汇：respect(尊敬); be polite to; obey(遵守) the traffic rules;

要求:(1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；

(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。

（3）词数：80词左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

                             How to Behave Well?

     In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in our life.

     First, we should keep our clothes clean and tidy. Be polite and friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. Then, our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. Finally, we should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more and more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文进行了较为全面的说明，能用简短的词汇表达出提纲的内容，并且进行了适当的处理，准确的添加自己的观点，同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。