Question

Nick的美国笔友Bob向他询问他和他的妹妹Linda及他兄弟Tom的业余爱好 假如你是Nick 请根据表格给Bob 写一封信介绍一下。 开头已给出。

People	Hobby	How long	How many
Nick	收集贝壳	5年	大约220枚
Linda	集邮	自从她十岁以来	300多枚
Tom	收集硬币	3年前开始	200多枚

Dear Bob,
I received your letter this week. Linda，Tom and I have different hobbies.
 
 
 
 
Yours,
Nick

Answer 1

Dear Bob,
I received your letter this week. Linda, Tom and I have different hobbies. We all like collecting things. I like collecting shells, I have collected them for 5 years, and I have about 220 shells now. My sister  Linda likes collecting stamps, she has collected them since she was ten years old. She has more than 300 stamps now.She says she can learn a lot from these stamps. My brother Tom likes collecting coins, he has collected them since 3 years ago, now he has over 200 coins. He still wants to collect more coins.
Can you tell me your hobby?
Yours,
Nick

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，所给材料要点清晰，要求明确，内容贴近学生生活实际，学生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。