Question

8．假设你是李华，今天你值日．在今天英语课上的"Duty report"中，你想对老师和同学们说说"中国式过马路（集体闯红灯）"．请你说说中国式过马路的现象，并说说你对这一现象的看法以及你认为正确的做法．
提示词语：cross the road，run the red light，in groups，follow the traffic rules，dangerous，run over，accident，important …

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．时态以一般现在时为主；人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从三个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：①中国式过马路的现象②对这一现象的看法③你认为的正确的做法
重点短语：
1．Chinese way of crossing the road 中国式过马路
2．In my opinion 在我看来
3． obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
高分句型：
【高分句型】1．It is common in China to see people crossing the road in groups when the traffic light is red．
在中国，红灯时看到人们成群过马路是很普通的现象．（It's+形容词+to do sth．）
【高分句型】2．So to change such kind of bad habit is a small but important thing for everyone．
对每个人来说，改变这种坏习惯是很小但是很重要的事情．（动词不定式作主语）

解答 Chinese way of crossing the road has been a hot topic these days．It is common in China to see people crossing the road in groups when the traffic light is red【高分句型】．Most people know it is dangerous，but a lot of people are still doing so．（中国式过马路的现象）
In my opinion it is a bad habit to rush the red light．Maybe you have something urgent or important to do．Maybe you think the traffic is safe．Maybe the drivers dare not run over you．But do you know your rushing is at the cost of your life？（对这一现象的看法）
I think to obey the traffic rules must start from us ourselves，because groups are formed by single persons．So to change such kind of bad habit is a small but important thing for everyone【高分句型】．From now on I'll strickly obey the traffic rules．And I'll also tell my classmates and my family to do so．（我认为的正确的做法）

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