Question

【题目】Bill有幸结识了一位外国朋友Peter,假如你是Bill,请根据表格内容，给你的笔友 Peter写一封email，以便更好地了解你。

自我介绍	姓名，年龄，外表，个性特征，生活方式，学习情况。
兴趣爱好	下棋，弹钢琴，打篮球------
上次的假期经历及感受	去北京游玩------

要求：1.文章必须包括表中所有信息,可适当增加细节,但不要逐字翻译。

2.根据需要可适当用上比较等级的句子。

3.词数在80--100词左右，文章开头结尾已给出,你只需接着写,不

计入总词数。

4.表达准确,条理清楚、语句连贯,文中不得出现真实的地名、班名

和人名。

Dear Peter,

How’s it going? I’m glad to be your pen pal.Let me tell you something about myself.

China is a great country for a visit.I hope you can come to China some day. I’m waiting for your coming!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Bill

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How’s it going? I’m glad to be your pen pal. Let me tell you something about myself. My name is Bill. I’m 15 years old. I’m tall but a little heavy. I ’m outgoing and helpful. At school, I’m hard-working. My teacher says I’m the best students in my class. After school, I often help my friends with their lessons.

I have many hobbies. I like playing chess, playing the piano and collecting stamps. I often show my talents in the school Art Festival. I also like playing sports. I exercise two or three times a week. I love playing basketball. I’m on the school basketball team. I have a healthy lifestyle.

Now I want to tell you my last vacation, too. I went to Beijing for a trip with my family. We visited the Great Wall, Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum. They are great places of interest in Beijing. We also enjoyed delicious food in Beijing hutong. It was a wonderful trip. It was so forgetful.

China is a great country for a visit. I hope you can come to China some day. I’m waiting for your coming!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Bill

【解析】

试题这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第一人称和第三人称。

【亮点说明】这篇文章主要是自我介绍和自己的旅游经历。文中使用了outgoing，places of interest等较高级的短语和词汇，而且还应用了形容词最高级best，playing等非谓语动词以及使用了恰当的连接词also等为文章增色不少。