Question

假如你叫大明，收到了你的英国朋友Tony的来信，信中他很关心四川雅安地震后学生的情况。请你根据他的来信内容写一封回信，感谢他对灾区学生的关心，回答他的问题，并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语：thank you, care to， go on， government ，offer，encourage， brave　
Dear Daming,
I’m sorry to hear that a big earthquake happened in Ya’an, Sichuan. Some school buildings broke down in the earthquake and many students couldn’t go to school. But I know the government is trying their best to help them. And Chinese people are so strong and brave that they aren’t afraid of anything difficult. Can the students go on studying now? Please tell me more about them.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, 
Tony
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.                                         
                                                                                 
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                              
Best wishes.  
Yours
Daming

Answer 1

Dear Tony,
I’m very glad to hear from you.
Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya’an, Sichuan. Yes, the students can go on studying now. It’s true that many students couldn’t go to school at that time. But as quickly as possible, the government helped them find new places to go on studying. And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave. I think they are not alone. China is a big family and love is just around them.
Best wishes.                                              
Yours
Daming

试题分析：本书面表达是一封回信，由于有来信，所以应该仔细阅读来信中的内容，弄清对方问的问题是什么，在进行回答。首先应该表示感谢，然后主要应该介绍现在学生的学习和生活情况，以及对将来的设想。书写时注意时态和人称的运用。
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改