Question

19．4月2日下午，沪蓉高速江苏境内发生连环车祸，导致两人死亡、多人受伤． 学校English Corner听说这一消息后，意识到随着经济的发展，家庭拥有汽车的数量在扩大，道路交通安全日益重要，决定开展题为"Tips for Traffic Safety"的英语征文活动．
现请你写一篇英语征文给学校English Corner，在文中分析交通事故的常见原因及并给出合理建议．

原因	客观原因	天气原因；路况；能见度…
	主观原因	酒驾；违反交通规则；疲劳驾驶…
建议	1．旅行前检查车况； 2．开车时注意路况； 3．…

要    求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．
Tips for Traffic Safety
As we all know，too many traffic accidents have taken place on the road．
 Maybe                                                           

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Sometimes people themselves do something wrong that causes these accidents有时候人自己也犯些错引起这些事故．
that引导的定语从句，修饰something，that作为从句的主语．
【高分句型二】
We prefer driving more slowly and safely to doing a little faster我们宁愿开的慢点安全点也不要开快．
prefer doing to doing 宁愿做某事不愿做某事

解答 Tips for Traffic Safety
As we all know，too many traffic accidents have taken place on the road．
Maybe there are many reasons causes these accidents such as，the bad weather and road conditions，the poor eyesight，some unexpected trouble and so on．（天气原因；路况；能见度…）
Sometimes people themselves do something wrong that causes these accidents．【高分句型一】Some drive after drinking，some break the traffic rules freely，some are still driving when they are very tired．Others drive in anger．（酒驾；违反交通规则；疲劳驾驶…）
All above are very dangerous．Before driving you'd better check our car carefully．While driving it's necessary to pay attention to the road conditions．We prefer driving more slowly and safely to doing a little faster．【高分句型二】（建议：1．旅行前检查车况；2．开车时注意路况；开慢点）
After all safety gives us the most happiness．

点评 要求学生平时积累好句式，在具体的写作中，只要句式正确，才适当增加具体的单词，这样才能以不变应万变．