Question

书面表达 （共1题，计15分）

假设你将参加社区“英语角”，本期话题是My Good Friend，请根据提示内容，写一篇90词左右的短文，根据要点要进行适当发挥，注意句意连贯。注意文中不得出现真实人名、校名等。

Personalities	Confident	not afraid of … / …
Clever	new ideas…
Hard-working	do extra work / …
Problem	like …best; not achieve a balance between…
Hero	favorite color; a heart full of love / …

My Good Friend

Answer 1

I have a good friend .Her name is Sally.She is confident.She is not afraid of speaking in public.She is very clever.She always has new ideas when she is discussing about questions.And she is hard-working.She often does extra work.She likes English best.But she doesn’t achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.Her favorite color is red.It is a heart of love.She is very friendly to others,so we all like her very much.

【解析】

试题分析：此篇作文要求小作者介绍自己的好朋友，这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文用一般现在时进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如She always has new ideas when she is discussing about questions.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：考查表格类作文。