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12．自从温州市政府推行"违必拆，六先拆"、"两拆两绿"、"拆围去丑"、"揭疤栽花"…等活动以来，相信同学们已经发现温州的变化：围墙拆了（remove enclosing wall）、垃圾少了、绿地多了、公园多了、空气清新了、玩的地方多了…温州变绿了，变美了很多！
请你结合以上内容谈一谈你对这些活动的看法以及你能为"美丽温州"做些什么，可适当拓展，写一篇短文，字数在100左右．（注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名）Many changes have taken place in wenzhou．The enclosing walls were removed．There are less garbage，but more greenbelts，parks and places to play．The air is clean．Wenzhou is more and more green and beautiful．These changes are related with Wenzhou government's activities．
I'am very happy to see these changes．And I think people in this city will be more comfortable and happy，too．I suggest that everyone should pay attention to the environment．Don't throw garbage everywhere．Go to work by bus or on foot．People who do not care for the environment must do a meaningful thing as a punishment．If everyone to do so，wenzhou will become more beautiful．．

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分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Many changes have taken place in wenzhou．在温州发生了许多变化．
现在完成时构成：have或has+done．
take place发生
句型二：
I suggest that everyone should pay attention to the environment．我建议每个人都应该重视环境问题．
suggest+that从句．
pay attention to 重视

解答 Many changes have taken place in wenzhou．【高分句型一】The  enclosing walls were removed．There are less  garbage，but more greenbelts，parks and  places to play．The air is clean．Wenzhou is more and more green and beautiful．These changes are related with Wenzhou government's activities．（变化）
I'am very happy to see these changes．And I think people in this city will be more comfortable and happy，too．I suggest that everyone should pay attention to the environment．【高分句型二】Don't throw garbage everywhere．Go to work by bus or on foot．People who do not care for the environment must do a meaningful thing  as a punishment．（建议）If everyone to do so，wenzhou will become more beautiful．

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