Question

1．三年的初中生活即将结束，你将展开全新的人生旅程．给亲爱的自己写点什么吧，回忆一下刚刚踏人初中校门的你，三年中不断变化成长的你，描绘一下今后不断努力奋斗的你．要求：80词左右，文中不出现自己的真实信息．题目：To the dearest self．
To the dearest self
                                              

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：Looking back，I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure回首过去，我经历了成功的喜悦或失败的痛苦．这是一个现在完成时引导的句子，go through经历，the joy of…的快乐，喜悦，the pains of…的痛苦．
高分句型二：Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study老师对我们很友好，对我们学习总是很严格．本句使用两个固定短语：be friendly to sb．对某人友好；be strict with sb．对某人要求严格．

解答 To the dearest self
        How time flies!Three years passed in a blink．（总体说明三年初中的时间之快）Lots of memories left in my head．Teachers，classmates，hard work and above all friendship stay in mind．Looking back，I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure（高分句型一：回首过去）．Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study（高分句型二：介绍初中三年老师的教导）．Classmates and friends help me so much．With their help I've made great  progress．But I'm a careless boy．And I always make mistakes which can be avoided．Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings．As it is said，"It is not our abilities that show what we truly are，it is our choice．"The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future．And I believe I can do it．（展望高中生活及自己的决心）

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