Question

丹东是中国最美的边境城市，如何让更多的人来了解丹东？请写一篇文章，介绍一下我们的家乡。可写它的地理位置、气候、物产、美食等等以及你对它的感情。

要求： 1.字迹工整，书写规范

2. 80词左右

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dandong City in Liaoning province is located in southeastern China. It is China’s largest border city and it has a population of 81 million. It is surrounded by green mountains on three sides.

  It is rich in prawn, swimming crab, clam and various fishes. It is famous for fresh and live marine products, which is praised by gastronomes. There are many natural and human scenery spots such as the Tiger Cave, the Camel Peak.The Moon Bay surrounded by the Island and the Double-Pearl Beach are the biggest natural bathing beaches in the corner of the northern sea in China and are the ideal places where people go to pick shells, see the sun rise and listen to the sea waves. I love my hometown.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，让我们介绍丹东这个城市,可以从这个城市的地理位置、气候、物产、风景等方面着手介绍。更重要的是在文章中要表达出你对这个城市的感情。通过分析我们可以知道这篇文章主要应用一般现在时态来叙述。写作时要注意时态和主语的一致，并且多使用短语和句型以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】这篇文章写作时运用了正确的时态和人称，行文连贯，叙述完整。按要求从丹东的地理位置、人口、特产、风景等方面为我们介绍了丹东这个城市，表达准确。并且文中运用了一些较好的句型如has a population of 、is surrounded by  、are the ideal places where people go to pick shells等，为文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。