Question

【题目】根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，你们学校英文网站正在针对上网是否是一件好事展开辩论，请你以The Internet is（not） a good thing.为题，写一篇短文给英文网站投稿,说一说你认为上网是好事还是坏事，然后说出2-3条理由的观点，

理由包括：人们通常用网做什么？为什么你认为上网是好/坏事？

提示词语：download, listen to, send email, chat, relax; hack(攻击) website, steal money, hide from police

提示问题：● Is it a good thing or a bad thing?

● What do people usually do on the Internet?

● Why do you think it is (not) a good thing?

Title: The Internet is ______

Some people say the Internet is ___________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

For these reasons, I think _____________________________________.

Answer 1

【答案】The Internet is a bad thing

Some people say the Internet is a good thing. However, I think it is a bad thing.

First of all, I think there are many bad people using the Internet. They send junk emails, hack websites and steal people’s money. In addition, it is easy for them to hide from the police.

Second, in my opinion children play too much using the Internet. Children can download games, listen to music and chat easily on the Internet. In addition, they do this for many hours.However, these kids do not want to do any homework! Therefore, the Internet is hurting their education.

For these reason, I think the Internet is not a good thing.

【解析】这篇短文要求我们以李华的身份给学校英文网站投稿，说明自己对上网这件事的看法。首先我们应选择一个观点，上网是一件好事或不是一件好事，然后根据此观点说明自己的理由，2到3条。因此这篇短文应分成三段，首先说明自己的观点；其次阐述理由，这是文章的中心；最后总结。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，注意正确使用be动词和实义动词。还应注意英语的表达习惯，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的单词和句型。以简单句为主，句式简洁、直接，为提升作文档次，点缀较高级的句型，如定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等等。还应注意语句之间的连接成分，使文章表达更流畅。