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5．2015年宜春市申请创建江西省第五届"文明城市"．作为一名中学生，我们应该为创建文明城市做点什么？请你根据下列英文提示，用英语写一篇英语短文．
提示：1．短文应包含图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Build a Civilized Cityobey traffic rulesrespect teachers and other peoplebe ready to help othersprotect our environment…


Build a Civilized City

Yichun applied for"The Civilized City"in 2015．As a middle school student，what should we do for it？
First，we should respect our teachers，parents and the old．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．Second，it's always good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others．Third，we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the road when the traffic lights are red．Last but not the least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．For example，we shoudln't spit here and there or throw litter carelessly．We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass．
In short，if everyone makes contributions，our city will be better and better．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Third，we must ①obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the road ②when the traffic lights are red．
①obey rules 遵守规则
②when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
①Last but not the least，②it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．
①last but not the least 最后也是最重要的
②it is+adj+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Build a Civilized City

Yichun applied for"The Civilized City"in 2015．As a middle school student，what should we do for it？
First，we should respect our teachers，parents and the old．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．（尊敬师长，明礼诚信）Second，it's always good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others．（友善待人，乐于助人）Third，we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the road when the traffic lights are red．【高分句型一】（遵守交通，不闯红灯）Last but not the least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．【高分句型二】（保护环境）For example，we shoudln't spit here and there or throw litter carelessly．We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass．（举例）
   In short，if everyone makes contributions，our city will be better and better．

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．