Question

【题目】尊老敬老是中华传统美德，你是老年之家(the old people’s home)的负责人王强，在假期即将到来之际，你想要招聘与你志同道合，愿为公益事业服务的志愿者。请以此为话题拟一则招聘广告。(30-50词之间)

提示：1. 要求有爱心，善沟通……

2. 请有意者给你打电话686-7729。

Volunteers Wanted

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Answer 1

【答案】【参考范文】

Volunteers Wanted

We need volunteers in the old people’s home. Do you want to help the old people? Are you good with the old? Can you sing? Can you dance? Can you play chess with the old? Do you know many stories? If you want to join us, please call Wang Qiang at 686﹣7729. Thanks.

【解析】本文是一篇招聘广告。写作时要注意格式，题目要求。为老年之家招聘志愿者，注意提示1. 要求有爱心，善沟通……2. 请有意者给你打电话686-7729。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。注意叙述的条理性，适当使用固定句型或短语。像Are you good with…? We need…；call … at…。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文格式正确，叙述有条理，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。特别一些招聘句型的使用，像We need volunteers in the old people’s home．Do you want to…；Are you good with; Can you; If you want to to join us 等，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，减少错误，给文章增彩。