Question

3．假设你是大一学生李玲，暑假想找份工作．你对上述广告很感兴趣．请根据招聘广告以及以下所提供的个人信息，写一份应聘信．
写作要求：
1．必须包括以下信息：
李玲，20岁，肇庆学院中文系学生．喜欢孩子，有耐心；擅长英语，爱好唱歌、跳舞．
经历：曾在老人院（the Old House）兼职，做过中文家教．
2．字数：60---80．文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．
Dear sir （ madam），
I'm Liling，20．I'm studying Chinese in Zhaoqing College．I can speak verygood Putonghua．I saw your advertisement yesterday and I am quite interested in the job．
As a college student，I have many hobbies．I am good at singing and dancing．My English is excellent．I taught an American child English and did very well．I am very patient as well．I took care of the old in the Old House as a part-time job．
I hope I can get the job and I'll try my best to do it well．You can call me at 2788955．
Thank you．
Yours，
Liling．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I took care of the old in the Old House as a part-time job我在敬老院做兼职照顾老人．
take care of 照顾
【高分句型二】
I hope I can get the job and I'll try my best to do it well．我希望我能得到这份工作，我会尽力去做好．
①hope 后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②try one's best to do sth 尽力去做某事．

解答 Dear sir （ madam），
    I'm Liling，20．I'm studying Chinese in Zhaoqing College．（个人信息）I can speak  Putonghua very well．I saw your advertisement yesterday and I am quite interested in the job．
   As a college student，I have many hobbies．I am good at singing and dancing．My English is excellent．（喜欢孩子，有耐心；擅长英语，爱好唱歌、跳舞．）I taught an American child English and did very well．I am very patient as well．I took care of the old in the Old House as a part-time job．【高分句型一】（经历）
I hope I can get the job and I'll try my best to do it well．【高分句型二】You can call me at 2788955．
Thank you．
Yours，
 Liling

点评 要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．