Question

【题目】书面表达。(15分)

过 去	现 在
旧房	高楼（tall buildings）
河水污浊(dirty)	河水清澈(clean)
步行、骑自行车	乘公交车、小汽车

请按照下面6幅图和表格的提示，写一篇题为 “Changes in Our Hometown”的英语短文。字数80左右。（开头已给出不计入字数）

Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.

In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给图画作文，根据图画，介绍我们家乡的变化。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去式，人称为第一和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there used to be…；The roads were…；The river is…；I am glad to…；But I think…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达珍惜现在的美好生活的感情。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们的家乡发生了变化，接下来从房屋、河流和道路这三方面介绍我们家乡过去和现在的不同，最后指出要珍惜现在的生活。此处用了take place, went to work, by bus, be glad to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。