Question

校学生会正举行关于学生遇到的种种“烦恼”的调查。请阅读以下20位学生的调查表，写一篇100词左右的短文。

Problem    Survey
Problems	Numbers of students
功课不好	6
和同学相处不融洽	5
在学校感到孤独	5
没有空余时间	4

要求：

1. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并选出你认为的最大烦恼，并给出建议。可做适当发挥。

2. 不得出现真实的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相关信息。

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Problem survey

Twenty students of the Students’ Union are doing a problem survey. __________                         

                                                                                          

                                       __________________                                 

                                               __________________________         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Problem survey

The Students’ Union is doing a problem survey. Six students think they do badly in lessons. Five of them think they can’t get on well with their classmates. And five students think they often feel lonely from time to time. Four of them say that they have no free time.

I think the biggest problem of all is that we can’t get on well with classmates. And I think we can do something to solve it. First, we should often smile at others, forgive others for their mistakes. Second, we should be friendly to others. When they’re in trouble, we can go to help them. Third, we can have a communication with them, then we can make friends with them..

It’s not strange to have problems. We shouldn’t keep worries to ourselves. I hope each of us will become better soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇书面表达要求我们以校学生会的名义对学生进行一个调查，调查的内容是关于学生们中间存在的种种烦恼。在题目中以表格的形式向我们呈现了这些烦恼，而且还有学生的数目。我们需要将表格中的内容用正确的英语表达出来，并且发挥想象力，选出你认为最大的烦恼，给他们提出建议。写这篇短文时，要注意字数的要求，100词，这对于学生来说是有一定难度的。同时注意使用较好的句型和短语，以使表达流畅，连贯。

【亮点说明】这篇范文是一篇比较优秀的作文，文章表达意思连贯，内容完整，具体的将表格中的内容表达了出来，而且有自己的观点，语言准确，几乎没有语法错误。并且这篇短文层次很分明，段落结构明显。文章中注意了长短句的结合，使文章的表达很有节奏感。文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，为文章增色不少，如five students think they often feel lonely from time to time、I think the biggest problem of all is that we can’t get on well with classmates.、we should be friendly to others. When they’re in trouble, we can go to help them、We shouldn’t keep worries to ourselves等。

考点： 表格类作文。