Question

5．为迎接中考，你常常复习功课到深夜．请根据下列图画用英语写一篇90词左右的日记．
注意：1  开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2．文中不得出现真实姓名．

I often stay up late to go over my lessons．Last night                               ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文，内容是根据所给图画写一篇日记，记叙自己的一天．文章时态是一般过去时为主，人称是第一人称，写作的过程中注意找准图片信息，要点要全，细节可以适当增加，以使行文连贯，还要注意条理清晰，使用一些过渡词及复合句，来给文章增色．
高分句型：
①When I woke up this morning，I found it was already 7o'clock．今天早晨当我醒来的时候，我发现已经七点钟了．句子中when引导一个时间状语从句，wake up醒来，I found 后面跟的是一个宾语从句．
②I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late．因为迟到，我害怕我会受到老师的惩罚．I was afraid 后面跟的是一个宾语从句，because of 因为，由于，of是一个介词，后面应该跟动词的ing形式．

解答 Saturday，March 26，2016 Fine
I often stay up late to go over my lessons（引出话题）．Last night I didn't go to bed until 12o'clock．When I woke up this morning，I found it was already 7o'clock（高分句型）．I put on my clothes，brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly．Then I rushed into the living-room，where Mother was cooking breakfast．Before she could say anything，I got my school bag，ran out and got on my bike．I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late（高分句型）．So I rode as fast as I could．It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school．To my surprise，I found the schoolgate was closed．Then I realized it was Saturday．（叙述我星期六去上学的经过）

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．