Question

14．Write a passage of at least 60words about the topic"A Ten-minute Break"．（以十分钟的休息时间"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．．
提示：进人初三以来，同学们倍感学习任务重，压力大．许多同学争分夺秒甚至连课间十分钟的休息时间也在看书做题．请以A Ten-minute Break为题，描写这一现象（包括你自己的做法．并针对这一现象谈谈你的看法．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us所以在那段时间不做任何累人的事对我们真的有好处．这里用动名词doing  nothing tiring充当主语，形容词要放在不定代词的后面，be good for sb．是一个固定短语，对某人有好处．
高分句型二：When the next class begins，I feel fresh again下节课开始时，我又感到新鲜．这是由when引导的时间状语从句，翻译成"当…的时候"．

解答 A Ten-minute Break
      As a Junior Three student，time seems much limited．As a result，more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon，even during the ten-minute break（进人初三以来，同学们倍感学习任务重，压力大）．In my opinion，to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary．Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally．
      During the ten-minute break，we do something to get rid of tiredness．What we need is to have a real rest，instead of getting more tired．So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us（高分句型一）．（我的看法）
       My ten-minute break is always pleasing．Sometimes I do some simple exercises．Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside．When the next class begins，I feel fresh again（高分句型二）（自己的做法）．

点评 在写作时，要尽量使用高分单词，短语和句子，句式，以便为文章增色．