Question

请认真阅读下面这篇文章，根据要求写一篇短文。
In most schools, students in one class have the same schedule (时间表). But at Beijing National Day School, each of the 4,174 students can build their own class timetable.
The school has used this alternative (可供选择的) education system since 2011. Students choose courses of different difficulty levels and categories (类别) based on their interests and abilities. They don’t have fixed classrooms or regular (固定的) classmates. Instead, they have more than 400 courses and 272 school clubs to choose from. The school hopes students can become masters of their own study and find their potential (潜能).
Students also like the system. Tian Yatong, 14, said she learns to be responsible (负责任的) for herself through the system.
She has chosen level 2 (the medium level) for math based on her current (当前的) abilities even though she has passed the level 3 tests.
“I like the teacher of level 2. I think it works best for me,” said Tian.
The system also “opens a new world” for students, said 13-year-old Li Zixuan.
Li was amazed to find that she could learn cooking, sewing , making films and many other interesting things at the school.
“You’re sure to find one that interests you,” Li said.
Li has chosen a cooking course this term. Now she can make different cakes at home for her parents.
“I may become a pastry (糕点) cook one day. Who knows?” Li said.
要求：
根据上文简述这种新的教育系统的两点优势
你如何看待这种新的教育系统
如果你有机会在这样的学校学习，你想选择什么课程和什么样的俱乐部，并说出原因。
注意：
短文必须包括以上要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
词数90词左右。
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Answer 1

One possible vision:
This is a new way of learning. I like it. First, students can choose what to learn, when to learn and who to learn from by themselves. They can learn the subject they are interested in. Interest is important in learning. Second, students don't have fixed classroom or regular classmates. This give students a chance to meet someone that has the same interest. And they can make more friends. It's good for students' growing.
I think this new teaching system is vary good. Students can learn according their own interests and abilities. This can make students better and better. But I think some basic subjects should be learned by everybody, not just be chosen, such as Chinese, math and English.
If I have a chance to study in this school. I will choose cooking and sewing courses. Because I can't cook and sew now. And I need these skills. What's more, I like cooking very much. I hope I can cook for my parents.

试题分析：本作文题目是对阅读和写作的双重考查，在读懂所给文章的前提下，对所提供的材料进行评价和阐述观点。所给文章内容是一种新的自选式的教育方式。题干有三个要求，一个是优势，一个是如何看待还有一个是选择课程并说明原因。作文要包含所要求的三点内容，同时，要语意连贯，不可以三点内容互相脱离。多运用所学短语句式明确表达自己的观点。
【亮点说明】例文完整地表达了题干所要求的三方面内容。段落之间比较连贯。每一方面的内容阐释也很有层次感，表达明确。例文从自由选择科目和更有利于交朋友两个方面来表达新式教育的优势。同时，从正反两面来评价这种教育方式，好处在于可以按兴趣学习，缺点在于没有对基础学科的整体要求。最后，例文作者选择了烹饪和缝纫，原因是作者喜欢和生活需要。