Question

雾霾最近成为人们最常谈论的话题，请根据你所了解的知识，写一篇不少于80字的保护环境的短文。

Answer 1

These days,there has been a thick haze in many areas of China.
The sky was full of haze. People couldn’t see far and even counld’t see the sun for days. What’s more,the bad weather lasted quite long.
The haze brought lots of problems. It not only affected traffic but also caused some illnesses.
Whay was the haze so serious? One of the main reasons is that there are more and more cars in China today. Factories also cause air pollution. Some farmers burn their straws.
To prevent haze,I think we should reduce pollution and try to protcet our environment.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要写雾霾的产生和影响，倡议保护环境，全文主要用一般过去时态。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如was full of ，What’s more，not only...but also, One of,more and more , lots of等短语；表语从句that there are more and more cars in China today. 宾语从句I think we should reduce pollution and try to protcet our environment；不定式做状语 To prevent haze.令文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。