Question

【题目】书面表达。

“Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too.”请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，

根据下表所列的要点写一篇60词以上的文章（文章开头已给出）。

学会对自己微笑	1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。 2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。 3、有益于身心健康。
学会对他人微笑	1、便于与他人之间的交流。 2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。
微笑是一种语言	人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

1. 参考词汇：

误解 misunderstand 自信confident 交流 communicate

2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do

you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile._______________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile.

First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself. Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence. Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.

Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.

In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile, every day will be shiny.

【解析】

这是一篇图表作文，要点是以表格的形式出现的，要求以LearntoSmile为题谈谈学会微笑的意义，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称和第二人称。

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1．学会对自己微笑：面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）；使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己；有益于身心健康。2．学会对他人微笑：便于与他人之间的交流；给别人带来快乐，自己也快乐。3．微笑是一种语言：人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

在写作时，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要点，然后加以整合，也可以适当发挥想象力使意思更加连贯；要点一定要表达全面，不能漏掉。写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，最好多用简单句，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇，这样会使文章更出色。还要注意句子的关联，上下文的过渡，都要符合逻辑关系。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。