Question

8．现在的人们热爱徒步（hiking）活动，背上背包，就开始一段旅程，请根据下列要点介绍徒
步的好处．
提示：
1．强身健体，对身体有益．
2．广交朋友，相互学习．
3．亲近自然，增强环保意识．
4．放松心情，快乐生活．
要求：
1．文中必须包含提示中的所有要点．
2．不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥．
3．必须使用第一人称写作．
4．条理清晰，书写规范，词数不少于80 0词
5．文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息．
Nowadays，we people love hiking very much．             ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Hiking is an exciting travel for people．徒步是适合人们的一个令人兴奋的旅程．
动名词做主语．谓语动词用单数．
【高分句型二】
It can ①make people strong and②it is good for body能让人强壮，对身体有益．
①make+sb+adj 让某人怎样
②be good for 对…有益

解答 Nowadays，we people love hiking very much．Hiking is an exciting travel for people．【高分句型一】It can make people strong and it is good for body．．【高分句型二】we know health is the most important，so hiking is a good choice to keep healthy．（强身健体，对身体有益．）People can meet new friends and learn each other（广交朋友，相互学习）．People can also get close to nature and be aware of environment．（亲近自然，增强环保意识．）It can make people relax and experience life happily．There is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world．Without it，life will be empty and meaningless．（放松心情，快乐生活．）

点评 这篇短文多次使用连接词and，为文章增色不少．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理