Question

我国不少城市正在推广公共自行车，提倡人们“绿色出行，低碳生活”。现在某英文网站就此话题征文，请你参考下面的要点提示用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈推广公共自行车的好处。

内容要点：

优   势	1. 比汽车便宜得多，每个人都买得起
2. 在上学、上班时段交通特别繁忙，如果有更多的人选择骑自行车，街道上就会有更少的汽车，也不会那么拥挤
3. 有利于保护环境， 因为……(请自拟一点)
4. ……(请自拟一点)
愿 望	……(请自拟一点)

要求：1、短文内容须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，……部分请自拟内容作答；

2、词数90左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；

3、表达中请勿提及真实校名及本人姓名。

提示：低碳生活：low-carbon life

Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it’s a good thing.

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Answer 1

Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it's a good thing．

Firstly, bikes are much cheaper than cars and everyone can afford them. Secondly, as we know, there is heavy traffic when people go to school or work. If more people choose to ride bikes, there will be fewer cars and the streets won't be as crowded as they are now. Thirdly, we can ride bikes to keep fit. The most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect the environment because it won’t bring pollution to our environment．

I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low-carbon life.

【解析】

试题分析：此题是提示性作文，要求根据提示及所给材料写一篇英语作文，主要考查写作能力，也是对英语综合知识运用的考查，这就要求仔细分析所给提示，不要漏掉提示要点，可适当发挥，写出语言流畅，意思连贯的文章。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言连贯，简洁明了。在文章中使用恰当的衔接词，为文章增色不少，同时也体现出作者的写作功底。例如：firstly，secondly，thirdly，这样使文章层次分明，一目了然；同时还是用正确的比较级句型使文章的重点突出，如：If more people choose to ride bikes, there will be fewer cars and the streets won't be as crowded as they are now.（如果更多的人选择骑自行车，汽车就会更少，街道也不会像现在这么拥挤）

考点：提示性作文