Question

【题目】假如你是张玉，是一名九年级学生，即将面临中考，可是你在英语作文方面有困难。请给某英语报社的编辑写一封电子邮件，请教如何提高英语写作技能。80词左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

I’m a middle school student of Grade Nine. And I’m working hard for the coming senior high school entrance examination.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Yu

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m a middle school student of Grade Nine. And I’m working hard for the coming senior high school entrance examination. I can do a good job on all of the questions in the English exam except the writing. I have been putting my heart into it, but I still can’t write a good article. Every time I begin to write, it seems that all of the words run out of my mind, and I always make mistakes when I write. What should I do ? Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my English writing? I am looking forward to your reply soon. Thank a lot.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Yu

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍自己在英语作文的困难，并向编辑请教如何提高英语写作技能。注意在写作时用第一人称单数。主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态灵活多变，非常合适。能准确的表达句子的意思。句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语，如it seems that…., and I always make mistakes when I write., run out of my mind, I am looking forward to your reply soon.等等。