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14．如今，中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化．假定你是李明，美国的笔友Lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期生活．请写封回信．要点如下：
●学习和休闲仍然重要；
●帮忙做家务或干农活；
●参加社会活动，做志愿者工作，帮助他人．
注意：1．词数80一100；
     2．请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥；
     3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：volunteer 志愿者
Dear Lisa，
I'm glad to have received your letter．Our holiday life has changed a lot．Learning and relaxing are still very important to us．Besides，we often help our parents do housework or farm work．Through that，we realize how hard our parents work every day．And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time．Also，we take an active part in social activities as volunteers．Sometimes，we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children．We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．We find great pleasure in all these activities．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是假定你是李明，美国的笔友Lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期生活．请写封回信．也就是说，写作时人称要用第一人称I和we，因为是介绍中国学生现在的假期生活，所以时态用一般现在时即可．
写作思路及要点：要点包括（学习和休闲仍然重要；帮忙做家务或干农活；参加社会活动，做志愿者工作，帮助他人．）在介绍假期生活时，要注意不要千篇一律，写成流水账，可以借用表示顺序的词（first，then）等，也可用到besides，also等副词．
重点句型及短语：
take an active part in   积极参加
try one's best to do 尽某人最大努力做某事
We often help our parents do housework or farm work．我们经常帮助父母做家务或农活．
Through that，we realize how hard our parents work every day．通过那些，我们可以知道父母每天有多么辛苦．
We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．我们尽最大努力去帮助那些有需要的人，让我们的家乡更美丽．
We take an active part in social activities as volunteers． 我们积极参加志愿者活动．

解答 Dear Lisa，
I'm glad to have received your letter．Our holiday life has changed a lot．＜引出假期生活的变化＞Learning and relaxing are still very important to us．＜休闲与学习＞Besides，we often help our parents do housework or farm work．Through that，we realize how hard our parents work every day．And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time．＜做家务和农活＞Also，we
take an active part in social activities as volunteers．Sometimes，we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children．We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．We find great pleasure in all these activities．＜假期生活及感受＞
　　Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming

点评 本文是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文，写作时要注意审清主题，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．尤其是本篇作文，使用一些表示顺序的词（first，then）等或besides，also等副词还可以使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．