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3．课堂是教育我们做人、教授我们知识、启迪我们智慧、传授我们的方法、培养我们能力、发展我们个性、促进我们成长的重要场所．在初中三年的课堂学习中你一定有许多难忘的瞬间．请以"An Unfor gettableClass"为题写一篇英语短文讲述令你难忘的一节课．
1．写作要点提示
（1）令你你难忘的这节课发生的时间、涉及的学科等
（2）这节课中令你难忘的活动、事件的发生过程
（3）你的感受或评价
2．写作要求：
短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言要流畅，可围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使短文的意思连贯；短文中不得出现真实姓名，校名及地名；短文的词数在90词左右；短文题目已经给出，但不计入总数，也不得抄入答题卡                    An Unfor gettableClass                                                                                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Nevertheless，I could do nothing but go back to school when time was up．
句中"when time was up"为"when"引导的时间状语从句；短语"could do nothing but do sth"意为"只好做…"．这句话意为：当时间到的时候，我只好返回学校．
高分句型二：
In general，it is one of the most unforgettable classes that I have ever had．
句中"that I have ever had"为定语从句，修饰"the most unforgettable classes"，句中有短语"in general 一般来说，总之"、"one of…之一"．这句话意为：总之，那是我曾经上过的最难忘的课之一．

解答 An unforgettable class 
   In that art class last Monday，I had a wonderful experience．And I was greatly impressed．（开篇点题）
   The art teacher took me to the park which was just beside my school．He told me to draw the fantastic views of the picture．The sun was shining brightly and I I had a good seat and began to paint the picture．It is a good place with the nice grass，the running river，the colorful flowers．I really like  staying there．Nevertheless，I could do nothing but go back to school when time was up．【高分句型一】I had to leave the park．（课堂经历）
  In general，it is one of the most unforgettable classes that I have ever had．【高分句型二】That day，I was on the top of the world．（我的感受）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．