Question

9．假设你叫张华，是美国中学生Simon的笔友，你收到了他的来信．请给西蒙写一封回信．针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议．

Dear Zhang Hua， My name is Simon and I am a Grade 9student．I am crazy about football!I have plenty of friends，and we always play football together at school or in the park after school． We like staying out late to play football．We often play for three hours or more and forget when to stop．Then I get into trouble at home because my parents do not allow me to play outside after 6p．m．What should I do？                                    Best wishes                              Simon

Dear Simon， Thank you for your letter．I hope I can offer you some useful advice．                 ． I hope my answers will be of some value to you． Best wishes Zhang Hua

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①It seems that you ②spend a lot of time  playing football似乎你花了很多时间踢足球．
①it seems that从句，似乎…
②spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
【高分句型二】
Of course，it is very important to have hobbies．然而，有爱好是重要的．
it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Dear Simon，
Thank you for your letter．I hope I can offer you some useful advice．It seems that you spend a lot of time  playing football．【高分句型一】Of course，it is very important to have hobbies．【高分句型二】However，it is not wise to spend hours playing football after school or to stay out late．I agree with your parents that it is better for you to go home earlier．（我的看法）Do not give up your hobby but do not forget about your family，either．Play football for an hour or two，and then go home．This is a good way to keep a balance between study and hobbies．（建议．）I hope my answers will be of some value to you．
Best wishes
Zhang Hua

点评 动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．