Question

【题目】随着手机功能日益增多，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇短文。

要求：

1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；

参考词汇：1. have effects on 2. concentrate on 3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use of

2.词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；

3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays with the development of the Internet, smart phones are widely used among people .Phubbers can be seen here and there. We can use phones to chat online, go shopping, know about lots of news, play mobile games and do other activities. There are many people who are crazy about their advantages but few people noticed it has some bad effects on them.

To begin with, more people have become silent because they concentrate more on mobile phones, which influences their relationship with their friends and families. They are not glad to have a face-to-face conversation with others anymore. Many students spend too much time on the phones in their spare time or at home so that they can’t finish their homework on time. Some students can’t put their hearts into studies. Some people become so addicted to them that they even use them when driving, which often lead to traffic accidents. Last but not least, using phones for a long time is bad for our health.

As a student, we should learn to make good use of phones. We should spend more time on our study first. We should go out to exercise, enjoy more sunshine and communicate with others.

【解析】本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。

写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。