Question

19．重阳节是我国的传统节日，如今又被赋予了新的含义，传统与现代巧妙结合，成为人们尊老助老的节日．假设你叫李明，请根据以下图片及要点向你的英国笔友John介绍该节日．
注意：1．邮件必须包括下面三幅画所描述的内容；
2．简述你对敬老的态度与做法（态度一条，做法两条）；
3．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）．
参考词汇：赏花 enjoy the flowers   敬老院  old people's home  尊重 respect n．/v．


Dear John，
Thanks for telling me about Thanksgiving Day．Now I'd like to tell you something about the Double Ninth Festival，a traditional festival in China．                                
Look forward to learning more about your holidays．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We should know what they can't eat and when they should do exercise．
句中"what they can't eat and when they should do exercise"为宾语从句，这句话意为：我们应该知道他们不能吃什么，什么时候应该去锻炼．
高分句型二：
What's more，it is necessary to take them to do medical examinations．
句中使用句式为"it is+形容词+to do sth"，"what's more"意为"再者，而且"．这句话意为：再者，带他们去体检很必要．

解答 Dear John，
Thanks for telling me about Thanksgiving Day．Now I'd like to tell you something about the Double Ninth Festival，a traditional festival in China．（开头点明主题）
On the Double Ninth Festival，according to Chinese traditions，people always enjoy the flowers with the old，climb to the mountain top to appreciate the great scenery．And people often help the old do housework at home，including old people's home．
As aging population increases，in my opinion，we should respect the old more．First，respecting the old means giving them more mental care，especially communicating with them about your everyday life，making them feel satisfied．Besides，caring more about their health is also important．We should know what they can't eat and when they should do exercise．【高分句型一】What's more，it is necessary to take them to do medical examinations．【高分句型二】（正文部分详细介绍重阳节）
That's my introduction about the festival and what we should do for the old．（结尾紧扣主题）
Yours，
Li Ming．

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