Question

【题目】书面表达。

根据下面表格的内容的提示，以“Changes in my hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100字左右的短文。

	过去	现在
环境	道路脏，狭小，到处是垃圾 有大块的空地	道路宽阔干净、路边绿树成荫 有商店和高楼大厦
生活	矮小的房子 收音机、电视	新公寓 电脑、网络和手机
交通	步行、骑车	公交车、出租车、私家车
你的观点	……

Changes in my hometown

Great changes ___________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The transportation was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

Great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become much better. The mountains have turned greener. The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars.

Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city. I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文进行了较为全面的说明，从对家乡的过去开始描述，然后转入对家乡现在的情况介绍，通过对以往的面貌与现在面貌进行对比，体现出如今人们生活的幸福与快乐。同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，如：take place发生；turn greener变得更绿；large and bright大而明亮等等为文章增色不少。使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。