Question

我们经常听到一些青少年抱怨老师或父母对他们要求太严格，不理解他们，给他们列了各种各样学习、生活、穿着打扮、业余爱好、将来的工作等方面的要求和规定。孩子们对此也有自己的看法并希望在有些方面可以自己做决定。请运用虚拟语气谈一谈假如你是父母或老师，你会怎样处理与孩子或学生之间的关系。

   要求：

1. 可以谈论至少三条学校或父母的规定或要求

2. 词数80左右。

3. 标题：  If I were a teacher ( parent )......

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

                   If I were a parent

  Nowadays,many parents have generation gap with their children.I think if I were a parent ,I can deal with this problem well.

  If I were a parent I would try to communicate with my child. I wouldn’t say I was not like this or that at his age. I would allow him to develop his hobbies,such as listening to pop music, watching action movies,choosing his own clothes. If I were a parent, I would encourage my child to have more fun after school. The most important thing is that I would set a good example for him and win his respect.

   If I were a parent,I can be a friend of my child.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用虚拟语气，所以在写作时，要尤其注意虚拟语气的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，开头结尾相呼应。开头指出现在父母和孩子之间有代沟，如果我是一名家长，我就能很好的处理这个问题。第二段论述自己的行动。此处用了虚拟语气的表达If I were a parent I would try 。communicate with，develop his hobbies，set a good example这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。最后在说和孩子做朋友与文章开头相呼应。

考点：话题作文。