Question

书面表达（10分）

人类只有一个地球。根据提示，以“Saving the Earth”为题，写一篇70词左右的短文。

提示:1.如何保护环境已经成为世界最大难题之一；

2.各种污染破坏环境，损害健康；

3.不要乱倒垃圾，乱排废水；

4.我们应该保护环境，使我们的家园更加美丽。

Answer 1

One possible version:

Saving the Earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.There are many kinds of pollutions around us,such as air pollution,noice pollution,water pollution and light pollution.We can find that rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people’s health.So we should not throw rubbish everywhere.Some factories pour waste water into the rivers and the lakes.The behavior of these factories will pollute the water,and sometimes it can kill the fish living in them.

We have only one earth.We must keep our environment clean and tidy.We must try our best to protect her,and make our home more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写一篇保护环境拯救地球的文章。应该用第一人称，时态是一般现在时。写作前先根据给出的提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。最后串联起来。内容要点包括：环境现状及保护环境的必要性。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。在70词左右的篇幅中，恰当地运用了一些短语和句式，如many kinds of，pour…into，try one’s best to do sth.，not only …but also…等。

考点：提纲作文。