Question

假如现在是晚上七点，你就是Tom, 请根据Tom 提供的下列信息， 写一篇描述Tom 一家人此时的活动情况，文章不得少于50词。

Father	read a newspaper
Mother	do the dishes
Grandparents	watch TV
Tom	do his homework
Rose	play with the cat

 

Answer 1

Hello! My name is Tom. I have a happy family. It is seven o’clock now, my family are all at home. My father is reading a newspaper. My mother is doing the dishes. My grandparents are watching TV. Rose is my sister, she is playing with the cat. I am doing my homework.

试题分析：本文的写作非常简单，首先说明自己有一个非常幸福的家庭I have a happy family.然后说明现在是晚上7点，家人们所做的事情，写的过程中注意在具体的某人点时间要用现在进行时态，注意主谓一致的情况，如表达祖父母在看电视时应用My grandparents are watching TV.注意这些细节，即可很好的解答出来。
点评：初一的英语作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。