Question

【题目】 时光飞逝，转眼间初中生活即将结束。在你的学习或生活中，你一定取得了不少进步，比如良好性格的形成、学习方法的掌握、生活技能的获得等。请根据以上内容，结合所给要点提示，以“The Biggest Progress I Have Made”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。

要点：1.你取得了哪方面的进步； 2.你是如何取得这一进步的； 3.你的感想。

要求：1.短文须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 2.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。

参考词汇：overcome；be afraid of；the school art festival；congratulate

The Biggest Progress I Have Made

Everyone has made a lot of progress in junior high school life.

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Biggest Progress I Have Made

Everyone has made a lot of progress in junior high school life. The biggest progress I have ever made is that I have overcome shyness.

I used to be so shy that I was afraid of speaking in public. Last year, my teacher asked me to sing a song at the school art festival because of my sweet voice. I was afraid and wanted to give up. But my teacher encouraged me and helped me practice again and again. The moment came, I remembered my teacher’s words: Believe in yourself! Everything went well. When my classmates congratulated me, my eyes were filled with tears.

At that moment, I was so proud of myself. From then on, I have changed a lot and became brave and outgoing.

【解析】

题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“The Biggest Progress I Have Made”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。