Question

根据图片内容写一篇约70个词的短文。要求内容完整，语句通顺，符合语法。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One day,a blind man was walking across the street. A car was going to him. At that time Jack was running up to him and pulling him back. The man was saved. And Jack took him to the other side of the street .The man thanked him for doing that.

But Jack didn’t wait for his thanks and went to school quickly. But he was still late for class.

Jack told the teacher why he was late . Hearing this the teacher asked the other students to learn from him.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图画作文。本文作者分三部分别写帮助盲人过马路、向学校跑和上课迟到，全文用过去进行时和一般过去时讲述。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如walk across，At that time， pull him back，the other side of the street，thank him for doing that，wait for，went to school，late for class.learn from，现在分词做状语，Hearing this被动语态The man was saved，宾语从句Jack told the teacher why he was late。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：图画作文