Question

1．根据提示和要求．写一篇短文．将短文写在答题卡情景作文空白处．
    初中阶段的‘学习即将结束．你认识了许多同学，也结交了一些好朋友．请用英语以
"My good Friend"为题写一篇词数60-80左右的短文，内容包括：姓名、年龄、外貌、
性格，爱好以及活动等．
    My Good Friend．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
My good friend is a beautiful girl called Song Min，who is 15 years old now我的好朋友是一个叫做宋敏的美丽的女孩，今年十五岁．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰 Song Min．
【高分句型二】
What's more，she likes singing．再者，她喜欢唱歌．
What's more另外，而且，插入语．

解答 My Good Friend．
My good friend is a beautiful girl called Song Min，who is 15 years old now．【高分句型一】She looks very tall and slim，and she has long black hair．（姓名，年龄，外貌）She loves reading，and every Friday afternoon is her time for a reading club．What's more，she likes singing．【高分句型二】She listens to the music at weekends，too．Yu Wenhua is her favorite singer．She is polite，and helpful．She is friendly to our teachers and classmates．（性格，爱好）She often helps her parents with housework．（活动）This is my good friend，everyone likes her very much．What about you？

点评 写作时要注意一些几点：
（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点．
（2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康．
（3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．
（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．