Question

你（Sam）在学校有很多朋友，你们彼此相处得很好。但是有一天，你的一个朋友丢了一百元钱。他认为是你拿了他的钱，而且他还把这件事告诉了其他朋友，于是他们对你不再像过去那样友好了。你对此感到很苦恼。你需要帮助，你要求你姑姑提出建议。
Dear aunt,
Hi!
                                                                                             
                                                                                       
                                                                                            
                                                                                         
                                                                                          
                                                                      Yours
Sam

Answer 1

Dear Aunt,
　　Hi! I have made many friends at my school. We are getting along very well. But one day one of my friends lost 100 yuan. He thought I had taken his money and he told others about it. They are not as friendly to me as they were before. I’m very unhappy.
　　I need your help. Can you give me some advice?
　　                                                                     Yours,
　　                                                                      Sam

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【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见短语made many friends交朋友； get along well 相处的好；give sb some advice给某人建议。He thought I had taken his money and he told others about it这个句子中and连接两个并列的句子，thought的宾语从句中用过去完成时。They are not as friendly to me as they were before.这个句子中运用not as…as，不象……,表示同级比较的否定式。