Question

【题目】提示写一篇短文,向某英语报社投稿。

要求:①包含所有要点,不逐字翻译,围绕要点适当发挥;

②书写规范、工整,条理清晰;

③文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等;

④词数:80-100 词,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?

Nowadays,more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.

Answer 1

【答案】Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?

Nowadays,more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.

Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for them to call their parents,teachers or friends. Second,they can search what they need on mobile phones. For example,they can look up new words and look through news.

However,some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time.Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Besides,it's unhealthy for the mind and the body,such as hurting eyes,making some bad friends.

In my opinion,students can't use mobile phones at school. It's bad for our health and study.

【解析】这是一篇观点型作文。关于中学生能在学校里使用手机吗？首先阐明当前的现状、现象。然后可以写出不同人的观点。再用不同的论据来证明不同人的论点、观点。适当增加衔接词，使文章有逻辑。注意人称、时态、单复数的变化形式。