Question

一个民族有自己的“民族梦”，一个国家有自己的“国家梦”，同样，每个人也应有属于自己的“美丽梦想”。最近，你班就“我们的梦想职业”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的调查情况。请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

注意：1. 100词左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息；
3．可在必要处作适当发挥。
Our Dream Jobs
Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students' ideal jobs. Here's a report about my group members' ideas.
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Answer 1

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students' ideal jobs. Here's a report about my group members' ideas.
Mary wants to be a teacher when she grows up. She is very patient and enjoys working with children . Now she works very hard and is interested in all the subjects. She gets along well with the teacher and classmates at school.
Kate is slim and good at dancing . She would like to be a ballet dancer in the future. She puts most of her effort into ballet training in her spare time every day.
Mike dreams to be a writer.He is creative and imaginative and willing to share his wonderful stories with others. Now he keeps reading and writing every day.
I want to be a singer beacause I can sing well and hope make everyone feel happy. I spend a lot of time practicing singing every day..
I do hope all of us can realize our dreams in the future.

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍小组成员的不同梦想。
【亮点说明】这篇短文在写作中注意句式的变化，如Mary wants to be a teacher …，…She would like to be a ballet dancer in the future, Mike dreams to be a writer., I want to be a singer beacause I can sing well。这使文章更条理，更丰富。