Question

书面表达（15分）

在你的成长过程中，家人（父母、祖父母等）倾注了大量的心血。他们对你的生活和学习除了给予关心、帮助外，也会提出一些建议。

1．Make more friends. 2．Listen carefully in class. 3．They help with my lessons. 4．They often have a talk with me. 5．They take care of me when I am ill. 6．They often wash clothes for me. 7．Don’t waste time.

请根据上面的内容，选择一点或几点，写一篇短文，向你的好友谈谈你的家人给予你的关心、帮助或建议以及你的想法。

Answer 1

My parents are very kind and helpful．They cook meals and wash clothes for me every day． At the weekend，they often prepare some of my favorite food．Sometimes they also help rile with my lessons．They are very strict with me．but when I make a mistake，they first listen to me and then have a talk with me instead of just complaining about it．They always try to understand me．I think that is a good way for a child to grow up．With their care，I am living and studying happily．

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要选择一点或几点，用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真思考，不要盲目书写，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文多次使用连接词and、but，以及频度副词，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。