Question

书面表达（10分）
请你给班主任陆老师写一封推荐信，推荐 Li Lei 当班长。（70—80词）
1. 乐于助人，经常耐心的给同学们解释数学难题。
2. 自信, 聪明。不担心自己做额外工作的能力。
3. 耐心, 做事有条理，从不忘记他必须做的事。
4. 精力充沛，今年暑假他参加了一次有意义的慈善步行活动--“Walk for Children”。
他认为那是一次学习团队精神的极好机会。
5. 我认为……（自由发挥1-2句）。
18th August
Dear Mr. Lu
We are writing to recommend Li Lei _______________________________________________
                                                                               
                                                                            
                                                                     
                                                                   

Answer 1

18th August
Dear Mr. Lu
We are writing to recommend Li Lei as our monitor. We think he will be an excellent monitor because he has so many good personal qualities.
Firstly, he is always ready to help others. And he often explains the hard math problems to the students with great patience. Secondly, he is very confident, clever. He believes that he has the ability to do the extra work. Thirdly, he is a person with great patience, and he never forgets the things he has to do. More importantly, he is very energetic. During this summer holiday, he took part in a meaningful activity-- Walk for Children. He thought that it was a good chance to learn team spirits.
I think that LiLei has all the qualities to be a good monitor .I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely

试题分析：本书面表达是一封推荐信，首先应该注意书信的格式，然后注意推荐的是别人，所以人称应该用第三人称；本文的时态也应该尽可能用一般现在时；书写时，应该注意表达的逻辑性，尽量将提示内容表达的直观清晰，符合英语的表达习惯。本文中会用到这些单词或短语confident、hardworking、careful、kind、clever、creative、imaginative、help sb. to do等。
【亮点说明】本文符合书信格式，时态运用恰当，人称和固定词组搭配合理，连词及其过渡语的运用得体，例如Firstly,，Secondly,，Thirdly,，More importantly,等。句子之间顺畅、叙述有条理，符合英语的表达习惯。