Question

【题目】我们都知道美国登山运动员Aron Ralston，他的故事令人感动，激励人心。在我们身边，一定也有那么一些人和事，他们或许平凡，或许渺小，但却总能鼓舞我们，摧人奋进。
以"The Person Encouraging Me"为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

基本情况	年龄、职业、外貌……
品质特征	勇敢、善良、勤奋……（任选其一）
具体事例	……
对你的影响	……

要求：1)任选一项品质特征，并用具体事例加以阐述。
2)文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。

Answer 1

【答案】The Person Encouraging Me

My English teacher is a middle-aged man who is about 1.7 meters tall. He is a bit fat with black hair and big eyes. His appearance would leave you an impression that he is very strict. In fact, he is a kind and easy-going man.

I can still remember one thing happened when I was in Junior 2. I forgot to do my homework. I thought he would be angry and punish me. However, he just kindly told me what I should do in the future. I was so moved that I decided to finish my homework on time from then on.

My English teacher is my hero. I am studying English very hard now, because I want to be an English teacher like him in the future.

【解析】这是一篇命题作文，根据要求以 The Person Encouraging Me 为题，写一篇文章介绍身边最能鼓舞自己的人，首先要介绍所写的人的基本情况，并在“勇敢、善良、勤奋”等品质中选取一项，用具体事例加以阐述。写作时注意准确运用时态，时态的选择上应以一般过去时态为主，发表个人观点时可用一般现在时态来阐述。人称为第一人称。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词，注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，注意描述的全面性，不能漏掉写作要点提示；语言的表述应该符合语法结构，句子应该符合英语的表达习惯。