Question

17．请以"Are we ready for the Senior High School Entrance Examination？"为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容要点如下：
1大多数老师工作十分努力，对我们十分关心，对他们的努力，我们十分感激．但有太多的考试，几乎没有闲暇时间来进行课外活动；
2有的学生过去懒惰，但现在已经意识到错误，并已经全身心投入到学习中去；人人都想超越自己．但有时过于担心自己的成绩，不知道接下去该怎么做．
3应该计划好你的时间，多听取老师和家长的建议，应该足够有耐心，绝不放弃．期望…
注意事项：1短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2第3要点的内容用1-2句话作适当发挥；
3词数90个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Are we ready for the Senior High School Entrance Examination？How times flies!The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!…           ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Some students ①used to be lazy，but  now they have realized their mistakes and②put their effort into study．一些学生过去懒惰，但现在已经意识到错误，并已经全身心投入到学习中去．
①used to do 过去常常
②put one's effort into 全身心投入…
【高分句型二】
You should be patient enough and never give up．你应该做有耐心，绝不放弃
give up放弃

解答 Are we ready for the Senior High School Entrance Examination？
How times flies!The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!Most teachers work hard．They care for us well．We are very grateful．But we have too many exams．We hardly have free time to have after-school activities．（大多数老师工作十分努力，对我们十分关心，对他们的努力，我们十分感激．但有太多的考试，几乎没有闲暇时间来进行课外活动；）Some students used to be lazy，but  now they have realized their mistakes and put their effort into study．【高分句型一】Everyone wants to go beyond himself．But sometimes they worry too much about their marks and don't know what to do next．（有的学生过去懒惰，但现在已经意识到错误，并已经全身心投入到学习中去；人人都想超越自己．但有时过于担心自己的成绩，不知道接下去该怎么做．）You should plan your time carefully and ask teachers and parents for more advice．You should be patient enough and never give up．【高分句型二】I hope all of us can enter an ideal high school．（应该计划好你的时间，多听取老师和家长的建议，应该足够有耐心，绝不放弃．期望）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．