Question

【题目】根据要求完成短文写作。

假设你是陈明,15岁,是某中学的九年级学生。你看完上面这篇文章后,深有体会。请你就此写一封信给报社编辑。

内容包括:

1.简单介绍自己。

2.告诉他(她)你在九年级某天的生活学习情况和感受。

3.距离中考时间不长了,你打算如何备考,努力考上你的理想高中?

写作要求:

1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯,词数80左右;作文的开头及结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Editor:

I have read the article in your newspaper.I think it’s great.Now I would like to tell you something about my Grade 9 life.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I have read the article in your newspaper.I think it’s great.Now I would like to tell you something about my Grade 9 life.My name is Chen Ming.I am a Grade 9 student in a middle school.I am 15 years old now.

Let me tell you what I did one day.I got up at 6:00,had a quick breakfast and went to school by bike.I had 5 classes in the morning and 4 in the afternoon till 5:45.Not all classes were interesting,but I had to listen carefully because they were very important for the coming exam.After school,I had to do much homework.I didn’t go to bed until 12 o’clock.I think my Grade 9 life is very busy.

Before the exam,I try to make a plan to study at home every day and make good use of every minute so that I can enter my dream school.

Yours,

Chen Ming

【解析】本文是一篇提纲作文。本文所给的提纲内容清晰，要求明确。动笔前要认真审题，挖掘深层内涵，简要勾勒要点，并适当发挥。写作中要注意人称、时态以及主谓一致问题。同时适当使用连词，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，注意不要出现语法错误。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色。

写作内容包括:

1.简单介绍自己。

2.告诉他(她)你在九年级某天的生活学习情况和感受。

3.距离中考时间不长了,你打算如何备考,努力考上你的理想高中?