Question

12．你叫李华，你的美国网友Tim写信告诉你他下学期将以交换生的身份来广州访问学习，这是他第一次来华，他很担心自己不能适应广州的生活．为了帮助他更好地了解广州的文化，你打算邀请他暑假来广州并寄宿到你们家．请你回信告诉他你的计划．请根据下面的构思图来拟定你暑假招待Tim的计划．

Dear Tim，
I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student．To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou，Iwill show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou．They are very famous．We will drink the morning tea and taste the delicious food of Guangzhou．Let's play Tai Chi together．And you can take a plan and do what you want to do in Guangzhou．I will help your wishes come true．．
Yours，
Li Hua
注意：
（1）词数80个左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．）
（2）不得透漏学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是回信邀请网友暑假来广州并寄宿到你们家．时态主要为一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1我的计划（1）参观广州名胜；（2）喝早茶，品尝广州美食；（3）耍太极
2其他计划
常用到的重点短语：
show sb around带某人参观
the places of interest 名胜
take a plan 制定计划
come true 实现
【高分句型】
1．①To help you ②get used to the life in Guangzhou，I will ③show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou．
①动词不定式做目的状语
②get used to习惯于，to是介词．
③show sb around带某人参观
the places of interest 名胜

2．And you can take a plan and do what you want to do in Guangzhou．
 what作为引导词的宾语从句，作为do的宾语．
3．I will help your wishes come true．
help…do sth 帮助做某事

解答 Dear Tim，
I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student．To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou，I will show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou．（参观广州名胜）【高分句型】They are very famous．We will drink the morning tea and taste the delicious food of Guangzhou．（喝早茶，品尝广州美食）Let's play Tai Chi together．（耍太极）And you can take a plan and do what you want to do in Guangzhou．【高分句型】I will help your wishes come true．（其他计划）【高分句型】
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全．句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致．文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性．写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全．文中有一些好的表达方式如To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou，I will show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou．They are very famous．We will drink the morning tea and taste the delicious food of Guangzhou．等等