Question

【题目】书面表达（10分）

假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Jim想了解一下中国家庭的家规(family rules)，请你根据你家的情况给他写一封回信，给Jim介绍一下你家的家规和你对家规的看法。

1. 对和朋友相处的规定

2. 对写作业的规定

3. 对休息时间的要求

4. 你的感受及意见

要求：语言合理、语句通顺；60词左右；信的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are too many rules in my family.

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are many rules in my family. My parents are very strict so I have so many family rules.

For example,I can't go out with my friends on school nights.On weekends, I have to go home before nine p.m. It's strict, but I think it's necessary.

And I must finish my homework in time. I can't play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself.

I have to get up at six o'clock every morning.And I have to be in bed by ten o'clock.

Thanks to these rules.I can keep healthy.But I think it is unfair to be in bed by ten o'clock! Students need nine hours sleep!

And I don’t think playing some computer games is bad for us children. So I think the family rules can make some changes.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封回信，要符合信的格式，因为这是给Jim一封回信介绍一下自己家的家规和自己对家规的看法，所以注意使用正确的主语。要注意主谓一致及动词的时态。最后要写出对家规的看法。

【亮点说明】本文使用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如: I can't go out with my friends on school nights. And I must finish my homework in time. I think it is unfair to be in bed by ten o'clock等，短文也使用了一些连词如：but，because和and等。使句子结构复杂化了。