Question

某市今年举办主题为“把希望带给贫困孩子”的活动。现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下（括号中的词汇可供参考）：
许多贫困家庭无力负担孩子去上学；(afford)
孩子们没有足够的钱去买学习用品和衣物；(school things and clothes)
每个孩子都应该有上学的权力；(have the right to do something)
我们应该尽最大的努力去帮助他们，比如……; (try one’s best to do something)
让我们一起给贫困孩子创造一个更美好的未来。(work together)
注意：
文章开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
词数80左右。
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.
Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. Because their family can’t afford to send them to school. At the same time, children don’t have enough money to buy school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for them. So we should try our best to do something to help them, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We believe if we work together, we can make a better future for them.

试题分析：这是一篇该材料作文，写一封倡议书。本题所给材料较为详细,我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来.写作中应注意描述的全面性，注意将所给材料表达清楚,注意应用所给短语,句式.结合语境可知本文主要是一般现在时态,注意主谓一致问题.为了让表达更符合逻辑，可以适当使用序数词；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。