Question

【题目】写作

健康对每个人都非常重要，但许多中学生对此缺乏认识，为了让你的同学更多的了解这方面的知识，请根据图示，以“How can we keep healthy?”为题写一篇短文。

要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2．必须包括所有相关信息，展开想象，

适当发挥；

3．词数：100左右, 开头已给出,

不计入总词数；

4．不得使用真实姓名和校名等。

How can we keep healthy?

Good health is very important for everyone, but most of us don’t know how to keep fit.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How can we keep healthy?

Good health is very important for everyone, but most of us don’t know how to keep fit. How can we keep healthy? Now there is some advice we can follow. First, we should have a healthy diet, and we should eat vegetables amd fruit. Second, we should have enough sleep. If we don’t have enough rest, we can’t have class well. Finally, we had better do more exercise, such as taking a walk, running. If we follow these advice, we will keep healthy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍保持健康的方法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there is..., we should..., If we don’t have...,we had better....等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意根据提纲提示进行表达。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了身体健康的重要性，接下来介绍保持健康的方法，最后指出遵循所给建议能保持身体健康。此处keep fit, have a healthy diet, do exercise, take a walk, keep healthy等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。