Question

1．"赠人玫瑰，手有余香"，帮助别人的快乐会让我们的生活变得更美好．你曾经帮助过别人吗？请以 I enjoy helping others为题写一篇不少于60词短文．
内容包括：1What do you usually do to help others？
2How do you feel about helping others？
3What will you do in the future？
提示词语：in school，out of school，help，classmates，old people，think，happy
注意：短文中，不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．
I enjoy helping others
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think①②it is a pleasure to help others in our daily lives我认为在日常生活中帮助他人是一种快乐．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
when I see old people walking across the road with heavy bags，I will go up to them and give them a helping hand当我看见拿着重物的老人在过马路的时候，我会走上前，帮助他们．
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 I enjoy helping others
I think it is a pleasure to help others in our daily lives．【高分句型一】I enjoy helping others．
At school，I will help my classmates to do their homework，especially if there are some difficult problems．I also help our teachers collect exercise books．I help my teachers a lot．
At home，I usually help my mother to do housework．My mother always says："Well done!"
On the road，when I see old people walking across the road with heavy bags，I will go up to them and give them a helping hand．【高分句型二】（怎样帮助他人）
I feel very happy after helping others．（感受）I will keep helping others and pass the spirit of helping others to everyone around me．（将来打算）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点