Question

7．你到过什么地方？你对它有什么深刻的印象？请用英语写一篇短文来介绍你游历过的城市或风景点．80词左右．
Have you ever been to Wuhan？I went there several times．I think it"s really a beautiful city．I fell in love
with it when I first travelled there．It has many nice places．The traffic is fine．And the people are friendly．
There are some beautiful parks such as the Zhongshan Park，the East Lake Park and the Liberation Park．In the
zoo，you can see many kinds of animals．You can easily buy what you want，because there are supermarkets
everywhere．You can see many tall buildings．And the streets are wide and tidy．Trees can be seen everywhere．
Buses and taxis can take you where you want to go．The drivers are polite．You will feel comfortable．There is
an airport in Wuhan．You can fly to the foreign countries and take air trips freely．Please travel to Wuhan．I
would like to be your tour guide．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I fell in love with it when I first travelled there．我第一次去那里时就喜欢上了它．句子中when引导一个时间状语从句，表示当某某的时候，fall in love with爱上…
②I would like to be your tour guide．我想成为你的导游．句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．

解答 Have you ever been to Wuhan？I went there several times．（引出话题）I think it"s really a beautiful city．I fell in love with it when I first travelled there（高分句型）．It has many nice places．The traffic is fine．And the people are friendly．（武汉给我的印象）
There are some beautiful parks such as the Zhongshan Park，the East Lake Park and the Liberation Park．In the zoo，you can see many kinds of animals．You can easily buy what you want，because there are supermarkets  everywhere．You can see many tall buildings．And the streets are wide and tidy．Trees can be seen everywhere．（城市风景）
Buses and taxis can take you where you want to go．The drivers are polite．You will feel comfortable．There is an airport in Wuhan．You can fly to the foreign countries and take air trips freely．（城市交通）Please travel to Wuhan．I would like to be your tour guide（高分句型）．（发出邀请）

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